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Maximum rush7/24/2023 From experience, no one wants to work with the guy who's so precious with his writing that he can't even handle basic notes. In the world of Always Sunny, Breaking Bad, House of Cards, and all of the others shows feat morally-reprehensible main characters, I think audiences will be okay with.a cop who pretends to be a priest?Īnyway, I suggest you learn how to handle criticism, because the way you reacted to a very gentle, and positive comment shows you aren't ready for this business. And I want to point out that your character's name is "Max Rush," which is just too obvious.Īlso, there was nothing shocking about the script in the first act, and I have to roll my eyes at the "non-PC" disclaimer in the OP. From the logline it sounds like it's the psychiatrist, but the script implies it's Rico-when really, it should be Max. The story concerns Van Damme's twin brother, killed in Nice in the first scene, whom he never knew he had. It's also not clear, from the logline or the first act of the script, who your main character is. Ringo Lam doesn't put a foot wrong in this action flick which keeps up a real adrenaline rush in its superbly choreographed, hi-energy action sequences. There wasn't a hook, and the conversation between the Grandmother and Max was not believable to me. The dialogue, from the 10 pages I read, wasn't bad, but there wasn't anything there to convince me that this would be different from any other good cop/bad, surly, rule-breaking cop procedural drama that we've seen a million times before at this point. Your teaser doesn't work or provide any reason for someone to tune in past the commercial break. You'll be lucky if anyone reads it all, much less gets past 2 pages-especially when you're logline is bad.Īnd foolishspecialist was kind enough to give you feedback at all, and their advice was solid. No Sale of Copyrighted Material or Sharing of Confidential Materialĭude, the whole point is that the amount of execs that would even read a 95 page pilot from an unknown writer is virtually zero. Posts Made by ( u/deleted) Accounts are Subject to Removal Observe Dedicated Weekly Threads for Loglines, Memes, Etc Provide Descriptive/Informative Titles for Posts Screenplays MUST be properly formatted/Do not post your film without the screenplay. No Contest, Coverage or Service AdvertisingĬomplaints About Paid Feedback Must Include Script and Evaluations No Socks, Trolls or Shitposting, Spam or Off-Topic Postsĭon't post personal blogs, personal websites, or unapproved self-promotion. Moderators reserve the right to manually approve/disprove posts based on how it affects the quality or state of the sub.WIKI: FAQS & FORMATTING INFO AND RESOURCESĭo not personally attack fellow redditors respect privacy, be encouraging, use your manners. If warnings are not heeded, further action by moderation team will be taken. Threads discussing leaks/new info need to be flaired with the spoiler tag.įailure to comply with these rules can result in post/comment removal. To hide spoilers use the following format (just remove all of the spaces). Posts showcasing game collections or merchandise outside of the weekly merch thread will be removed.ĭo not describe or ask for methods of obtaining Monster Hunter games illegally.Īll leaks and any newly released information must be marked as spoilers outside dedicated threads. Self-Promotion posts are allowed on a 1:5 ratio basisįive posts or comments for every self-promoted submission (Videos/Guides from your personal youtube, etc.) Users not following this ratio will have their posts removed. (e) Full frontal nudity/camel toe/borderline pornographic or hypersexualized content is NOT allowed. Īrtwork submissions must adhere to the following criteria: Minor Achievements & Crafted Equipment collections Uncivil posts will be removed at moderator discretion. Insults, inciting arguments, and discrimination will not be tolerated. Posts similar to recent threads will be removed. Additionally, buying and selling of services (merchandise, exclusive quests, etc) is not allowed.Ĭhances are your question has been asked before. Rage/Complaint posts belong in /r/monsterhunterrage. Recruitment posts for in game hunting or clans belong in /r/monsterhunterclan. Memes and similar posts belong in r/MemeHunter and will be removed from this sub. Non-Monster Hunter related material will be removed at moderator discretion.Ĭertain topics belong in specific subreddits Submissions must be directly relevant to Monster Hunter ASK QUESTION SUBMIT MEME DAY MODE NIGHT MODE MHW: Weekly Reset Thread | Remove Art and Highlight posts | Accepting Mod Nominations ★★★ RULES ★★★
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